Narrative Writing: Brooke C

I look out the window, my life flashed before my eyes. It was flooding around me. I get my dog and slowly walk outside. I see people drowning around me. I sprint inside to get my family mum, dad, Emma, Ellie and Piper. We climb up the wall onto the roof. I felt like I was Spiderman climbing up the wall. I helped my dog up, then I look around me people where drowning. “What was that?” I say. It was like a giant was shaking the house. It was an earthquake. The house was drowning. I hear “Help! Help!”

By Brooke C

Great writing Brooke. I like how you have tried to explore your language to make it more descriptive. Well done.

Mr A