Monday, September 10, 2012

The Town by Kieran C

THE TOWN

It was quiet...too quiet that could only mean...that I was the only one left in town. I think to myself ‘’It can’t be.’’ Then I hear something in the biggest, very biggest house on the corner of the town. I was scared, very scared not wanting to go near the house. I then go to take one step but my feet wouldn’t move, they felt like lead. So I try my hardest to go and check out the house. I hear that strange noise again “It’s coming from the top stairs” I mumble to myself, just as I open the door...
Someone pulls me in, I try to escape but this ‘someone’ was too strong for me to handle. Suddenly, smash! My head banged against this pillar that was hanging from this dusty and rotten roof.  A few minutes later I find myself in this cage dangling from the ceiling, now I was very scared.  Then I feel something warm against my neck then I whisper to myself “this doesn’t feel good.” Then I slowly look back and then something leapt onto my body. This something said “nice to meet you, what’s your name?” I replied back “I ’m not telling you.”
BANG! I hear something coming from the distance then the something that leapt onto me vanished behind a box.
I think to myself “This is some strange house”, so I go to hide behind something but there is nothing so I stand still like my life depended on it. Now I can see the thing that made a big bang sound.  They are like the biggest creature I have ever seen.  I try to think quickly then at the top of my head, I think of a brilliant idea. I look at the top of the cage.  I’ve got this wire that can probably get me out of here, then I put it in the key hole, it fits. As I prepared to leave I asked the ‘something’ that went behind the box if it wanted to come with me. It did.

When we got out of the cage there was the creature 5m away so we got on top of the roof to escape this haunted house.
After we got out of the house, well haunted house. I said to the ‘something’ that came with me, “My name is Michael Craig and you are?”  “I am a monkey, a strange monkey”.
The only thing we have to do is get out of here so we make a plan.
An hour later here I am in the City of Cambridge with my little friend that helped me out of the house, well haunted house.
THE END
By Kieran C 

1 comment:

  1. Great story Kieran. I enjoyed the various language features you have used. Keep it up!

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